Video summary
The video features an IELTS Speaking test analysis for a candidate who has been studying English seriously for only one year and achieved an overall Band 6.5 score. The examiner begins by reviewing the candidate's responses in Part One, where she discusses her studies in fashion design, her passion for the industry despite its negative aspects, and her future goal of launching her own brand. She also shares details about her lifestyle, including her love for sports like Pilates, her preference for introverted social circles, and her ideal day off which involves beach walks, podcasts, and relaxing at home. The examiner notes that while the candidate was initially nervous, she grew into the test and became more confident and fluent as the interview progressed.
In Part Two and Three, the candidate demonstrates strong vocabulary related to her interests in fashion, luxury goods, business, and feminism, using high-level phrases such as "unapologetic," "spirituality," and "authentic." However, the examiner points out that her performance fluctuates when she is asked about unfamiliar topics, causing her grammar and fluency to drop. She struggles with translating thoughts from Arabic in real-time, which slows down her speech and leads to occasional grammatical errors like mixing up verb tenses or articles. The examiner explains that to reach a higher band score, such as Band 8 or 9, she would need to stop translating and start thinking directly in English, a skill that requires significant practice with listening and speaking on diverse subjects.
The final assessment breaks down the candidate's scores by category, highlighting her strengths and areas for improvement. Her vocabulary is rated highly due to her specific knowledge of fashion, but her pronunciation receives a Band 6 because of certain sounds influenced by her native Arabic tongue, which are not fully clear to an examiner. Her grammar also scores around a Band 6 due to frequent minor mistakes that, while not severe enough to cause misunderstanding, are too common for a higher score. Despite these issues, the examiner praises her overall fluency and concludes that achieving a Band 6.5 in just one year is an amazing result. She encourages the candidate not to worry about her current level, predicting that with continued practice, she will rapidly improve and soon be able to discuss any topic with native-like proficiency.
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Let's start off by talking about your
studies. Do you work or do you study?
>> Um yeah, so I study fashion, fashion
design and fashion business and um I
want to launch my own brand soon. So
yeah, that is my current situation.
>> What's your favorite part of your
studies?
>> I have a passion for fashion. So like
everything we learn is just for me an
eyeopening
and getting to know the industry from
professionals.
It's just amazing for me and I grew up
in in a place where it's like all this
industry is not so accessible for us. So
here
it made me see uh on real life how
fashion works, how the industry works,
how creative works and yeah this is what
I like about my studies like touching
it.
>> Is there anything you don't like about
your studies? Um well yeah as I said
there's this fun part but there's also
um the part where you get to see also
the industry negative parts
where when you hear about fashion you
think it's all glamorous and fun and
parties and after parties and fashion
shows but it's also the hard work and
sometimes it get toxic sometimes it
really um
occupied your whole life
or occupies your whole life. Um so yeah,
that was for me like um shocking at
first, but I guess that's life.
>> And what do you hope to do in the future
with your studies?
>> Um yeah, so as I said, I want to launch
my own brand. So this is uh why I
started fashion in the first place
because I always dreamed about having my
own thing and
giving my creativity a space to express
itself because I always felt like I have
something to give to the world and
fashion for me was the way.
>> Now let's talk about your lifestyle.
What do you like to do in your free
time?
>> Oh, I like to do a lot of sports. I like
to go to the gym and go for long walks
and do a lot of pilateses.
And um I like to hang out with my
friends
and I like to do a lot of journals just
to like, you know, get the thoughts out.
Um yeah, but I'm really passionate about
sports. So like I'm always like looking
for new sports and training. Do you have
a busy social life?
>> No, I like to be an introvert. Yeah, I
don't like to be everywhere and with a
lot of people. It give me anxiety. I
feel like chaotic.
So, I prefer to be with close people,
close circle, people who I know and who
knows me and that I feel um the most
genuine with. Can you describe your
ideal day off? Saturday or Sunday,
something like that?
>> Oh, I love day offs. So, I just wake up
and I mostly go to the beach to take a
long long walk and enjoy my coffee
there.
And I like to listen to a lot of
podcasts about topics that I like,
whether it's fashion or business or
sports or wellness.
And then I like to meet my friends for
lunch.
So we discuss our week and we chitchat.
Um yeah, then I like to go home and just
reset, take a shower, and put some mask
on, watch some movies, serious, and just
like, you know, to wind down and to feel
like I'm rubbing the week.
>> Is there any activities that you would
like to start in the future that you
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>> I wanted to learn how to play battle
because it's everywhere here. So, I feel
like this pressure of trying this sport,
but I'm just um
I don't know. I feel it's a little bit
um
intensive.
>> Now, let's talk about podcasts. What are
some of your favorite podcasts?
>> I like podcasts about two topics mainly.
business where founders talk about their
businesses and um what are the issues
they faced along the way and um how they
hire employees based on what and
basically their whole journey and the
other thing is about girl empowerment.
Um because as a girl in this you know
word um I find it really empowering to
hear other women's talking about their
struggles and how they overcome it and
um what helps them and how to stay in
your femininity in a world full of
masculinity and
hard things.
>> What activity are you normally doing
when you're listening to podcasts? Are
you doing something or are you just
doing nothing and just focusing on the
podcast?
>> Yeah, so cleaning the dishes or taking a
walk. Yeah, that's like whenever I'm
cleaning the dishes or the house, I put
the podcast or whatever I'm taking a
long walk.
>> And do you prefer podcasts where there's
just one person speaking or multiple
people speaking at the same time?
>> I don't mind really. um as long as the
topic is really interesting to me and um
I know that the person is someone I know
that it's worth trusting
like he has some impact
on other people's word. Yeah.
>> Do you think that uh podcasts help you
improve your English?
>> I think a lot. Yeah. Because for me
whenever I hear a podcast sometimes I
try to um rephrase what they said. So
like in my mind I'm trying to like say
the words that they said or trying to
copy the accent sometimes. So yeah.
Yeah, that helped me a lot.
>> Now let's talk about uh housework. Do
you do the housework at home?
>> Yeah, I do. I do. I I really love to
clean my place and um do the housework
and take care of myself.
>> Is there any housework that you refuse
to do or you don't like doing? Um, no. I
really enjoy it. It's like something I
don't know how to explain it, but I I
really enjoy it.
>> And were you given chores as a child?
>> Choice.
>> Chores. And so those are little jobs
around the house like um picking up
doing the dishes or taking out the trash
um that parents sometimes give their
children.
>> Yeah, it was always the dishes. That's
where I um developed my love for doing
the dishes. People always ask me like
how how do you love doing the dishes?
But I just can't explain it. It was my
job. So now I'm stick to it. Yeah. So I
would like to own one luxury item or in
general in general anything that is
Roberto Cavali um vintage dresses. I'm
inspired so much about from Roberto
Cavali. Um, and mostly how the dresses
is
feminine in a way that is unapologetic
and it's inspired mostly by animals
which feels for me spiritual. So like I
love this connection between
spirituality and animals and other
lives with fashion. And a redesign is
really
sexy. And the reason I really want to
own them is because I think everything
vintage is much more powerful
for me because I feel it's more
authentic.
in a way where now luxury houses tend to
um you know go with a trend. So I feel
like
when it is vintage it was to be it used
to be the real designer vision
and you can see the passion in it
and you know not everyone can own them
so that's a plus. Every woman wants to
be special. So yeah, this is what I like
about those dresses. And I can name a
few designers more that I write that I
like to have their vintage dresses. Um,
that's the end of part two. Well done.
Okay, so we've been talking about uh
luxury items and we're going to continue
to talk about expensive items and rich
people. Which expensive items do young
people want the most?
>> Wow. Now it's obvious. The Birkin, the
mini Kelly, it's everywhere.
It's it's it's the way to say I am the
Edgirl in today's world. So I think it's
in every girl bucket list for now. Um I
think that made the Birkin less special.
because it's originally has been made to
be this exclusive item that not anybody
can has or own it, but now it's just
everywhere. So, I think we should move
on.
>> So, those are the items that young
people find attractive. What about
expensive things that older people find
attractive? Are they the same or are
they different?
>> That's an interesting question. I think
it depends on um
how much
you want to spend on an item as a young
or um an old rich individual. Um but I
think for rich people, they tend to more
spend on items that are investments
more than showing off. So, like I like
to think that old people wants to buy
more um watches or houses or maybe
vintage cars
more than what it what bag is trendy.
But, uh in terms of women, I still think
that old women, they want to feel the
young spirit again. They want to to
follow the trend sometimes. Yeah. Do you
think people are more likely to buy
luxury goods for themselves or for their
loved ones?
>> I think for their loved ones because
first is it's a way to describe your
love and like it's always also give you
more satisfaction in a way because you
know you're making the other one or your
significant other um happy.
Um it's not only about luxury, it's it's
all about like anything. I feel like
it's always you feel better when you buy
someone else something rather than
buying to yourself.
But we should also spoil ourselves
because we deserve it.
>> Do you think luxury goods and being rich
makes people happy?
>> Oh,
it's not the main reason, but it makes
people's life easier. for example, um
when you have that aspect figured out,
which is the financial aspect. So now
like you have more time to think about
the other things, maybe you're not
happy, but at least you're comfortable.
You can solve your problems in a more
comfortable way without feeling like you
need to survive.
>> That's the end of the speaking test. Did
you feel different from the start of the
test to the end of the test?
>> Yeah, for sure.
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>> I felt more confident. I felt the flow
is like more flowing. Yeah, it's just in
terms of confidence and um stress.
>> I think you really grew into the test.
You were way more confident and fluent
and uh and and sure about what you
wanted to say. at the end compared to
the beginning. At the beginning, you
were a little bit unsure, a little bit
nervous, you were making more mistakes
and then you just gained more and more
confidence. The good news is that a good
examiner will recognize that and they
won't judge you on the first few
questions. They'll judge you on the
entire performance and they'll really
take into consideration a good examiner
will notice that you gained in
confidence and you your your ability
your performance improved as you went
through.
>> So for someone like you who's a little
bit nervous at the start I don't know if
I'm scary but some examiners will be
scarier than me on test day. Not all
examiners will be that way. They're are
human beings. Some of them are tired.
Some of them are grumpy. Don't let that
put you off. So, let me give you some
feedback on part one, part two, and part
three, and then I'll give you your
scores. So, part one, um, as I say, you
were a little nervous at at the at the
beginning of part one, but you did grow
into it. Um, you did get much better as
it went through. Most of your answers
were quite good, though. Um, you were
developing your answers enough, you were
answering the questions properly, you
were staying on topic. One thing to be
careful of is is I think I asked about
what you did in your free time or what
sports you did and you just listed lots
and lots of activities and lots and lots
of sports. It's much easier to pick one
sport instead of football, Pilates,
yoga, basketball, walking. Pick Pilates
like why do you like Pilates? Where do
you do it? How often do you do it? It's
often easier to talk about things in a
deeper way than to go wide and just list
everything that you can. So if they ask
you for example, what's your favorite
food? Instead of being like, I like Thai
and Chinese and Indian and pizza and
pick one. I like Thai because of this
reason, this reason. My favorite dish is
this. Um I I like this restaurant. It
just helps you become a lot more fluent
than trying to think of the next thing
and the next thing and the next thing.
Does that make sense?
>> Yeah.
>> But overall, um part one was really
really good.
>> I thought you did an excellent job with
part two. I really liked the vocabulary
that you were like it was just one
highlevel uh phrase or word after
another. I think you were quite lucky
with with the topic that you got. Not
everybody will get the topic that they
feel passionate about. One thing that
you could do is sometimes they will ask
you uh they they will give you something
that is quite vague like talk about a
book that you read. So you're very
confident talking about fashion. You
could say, "Oh, I I got a book on Chanel
or Tom Ford or or something like this."
Or even something like talk about a
place that you visited. Oh, I went to
Dubai because Dubai Mall has
>> the best shopping in the world or
something like you're kind of you can't
do that for every question, but steering
it towards things that you feel like you
love sports, you love fashion, you love
business. When I asked you about the
podcast, you were talking about
femininity and womanhood and things like
that. And when you were talking about
topics you were very confident or very
familiar with, your answers were much
better.
>> Yeah.
>> When I asked you about things you were
not so sure about, you struggled a
little bit. And interestingly,
>> your grammar and vocabulary was much
worse whenever you were talking about
things that you were uncomfortable
talking about. And it was much better,
even your grammar was better when you
were talking about topics that you felt
comfortable talking about. because the
level of English that you're at, you're
having to think a lot about what's the
right word, what's the right phrase,
what's the right tense, um, on top of
what content should I be talking about.
So, when you're talking about fashion,
you you don't really have to think about
the content. So, you can focus more your
brain subconsciously is focusing there's
more power going to that part of your
brain. So again, try to steer it towards
topics that you're familiar with, but an
examiner, a good examiner will notice
that and they will throw some topics at
you that you're not expecting just to
see how you cope with it.
>> Um, and they won't judge you just on
when you're talking about luxury goods
cuz you're you're so good at that.
>> They'll judge you on the whole test. So
just uh be aware of that. Again, part
three, really good development. Um, and
I like the the vocabulary that you were
using there, like talking about it girl
and the fashion business and girls want
to be spoiled and want to feel special
and all of these different things, which
is really really good. Again, it's a
topic you seem very confident about
talking about. Part three, you won't
always get topics like that. So, I would
really recommend practicing um different
topics and becoming comfortable with
that. I think your main enemy is your
nerves. it showed at the beginning and
maybe getting something that you feel
uncomfortable talking about. Um so you
just need it just comes through practice
and developing that as a as a skill.
Let's talk about your um the things that
you did well in terms of your scores and
things that you need to work on. Your
fluency is quite good, but there
especially when you're talking about
unfamiliar topics, you can tell that
your brain is really searching for the
next word and the ne the vocabulary.
That's not a criticism. That's just how
we deal with languages and what that
we're learning. Are you translating from
Arabic?
>> Um, yeah, actually. Yeah.
>> Okay. So, that I thought that because
>> the part of your brain that deals with
translation is different from the part
of your brain that deals with producing
the actual words.
>> Okay.
>> So, you are accessing one part of your
brain, translating from Arabic and
taking it, putting it into another part
of your brain and producing that.
>> Yeah. If you wanted to get a very high
score for fluency, you would have to
start thinking in English. It depends on
how what kind of score that you're
hoping to get. But if you wanted a band
eight or a band nine, you would have to
stop translating and start thinking in
English. Um that would mean that you do
a lot more practice of for example
listening to a podcast in English
completely thinking about it in English
and then talking about it or writing
about it in English and getting into the
habit of doing that.
>> Also when you're learning new words and
phrases don't use any translation. Don't
put the Arabic beside it. Put um the
English word
>> the meaning in English an example
sentence in English. You could use
synonyms, collocations, all these
different things in. So, it's forcing
you to start thinking in English. It's
challenging and it's a lot of work. It
really depends on your goals. Like if
you want to work um like for example, if
you wanted to work in the fashion
business in New York or London and you
needed uh or you wanted to do a master's
in fashion or something like that, you
might want to consider taking that step.
At the minute, you're around about seven
for fluency, which is good. it means
that you have no problems there. But
band eight, band nine is more like
native level. If you wanted to do that,
you could. At the minute, I for your
life goals, I don't really think that
you need to.
>> Um, probably your biggest strength is
vocabulary. So, for example, you're
talking about being inspired, feminine,
unapologetic, inspired by spiritual,
spirituality, designer's vision. It's
authentic, excellent vocabulary. You can
tell that you've studied luxury goods
and fashion. And the good news is is
that you have learned so much great
vocabulary. But to get one of the higher
scores for vocabulary, you would need to
to do it at that level for all lots of
different topics.
>> To get a band eight or a band nine, I
would have to ask you about multiple
different things. And you can use words
at that level for that topic. I would
need to test you again on on very
unfamiliar topics to see what your real
vocabulary level is. It was interesting
at the beginning in part one when you
were talking about unfamiliar topics,
your vocabulary wasn't as good. So, I
think that you're around a band seven
for vocabulary. If you wanted to get to
a band eight or a band nine, you would
need to start reading and listening to
podcasts and things like that about
topics that you're unfamiliar with. It's
uncomfortable, but all growth is
uncomfortable. So
>> um the two areas that you need to work
on one more than the other the vast
majority of your pronunciation is clear.
>> So what an examiner will be thinking
about is do I understand every word that
she's saying.
>> Mhm.
>> To get about seven eight or nine every
word needs to be 100% clear. 99% of your
words are clear. Some some words are
not.
>> So let me give you some examples. I have
something to give to the word. I wanted
to learn how to play battle to feel like
I'm robbing the weak.
>> There's only a few times where I'm like,
"Battle? What is battle?" Or word word?
What do you mean? World? There's only a
few times that that happens, but it's
enough that you wouldn't be able to get
one of the higher scores. You wouldn't
be able to get about seven, eight or
nine. Also, um, because your native
language is Arabic, the rhythm of your
speech, your word stress is, and this is
not a criticism, it's just the fact that
you're an Arabic speaker is is
influenced by your native tongue. If I
didn't show you and I just said, "Listen
to this person. Are they a native
English speaker?" No one would say,
"Yes, they're de they'd say they're a
very good English learner. They speak
English at a very high level, but we can
tell you that they're definitely not,
you know, a native speaker or at that
level just yet. It's not that you have a
problem with certain words. It is you
have a problem with certain sounds in
English. English is made up of several
sounds which are different from our
Arabic is made up of of lots of
different sounds that are different from
English. English is made up and every
language has different sounds. The
sounds that you have a problem with are
the ones that are very different from
your native tongue from Arabic. So it's
not about fixing your entire
pronunciation. It is about identifying
what are those problem sounds or problem
words in English and fixing those. You
would need to work with a coach or a
teacher to to do that. Or you could just
speak into your note takingaking apps in
Apple Notes and it will when you say
paddle it will say battle.
>> Oh. and you know immediately, oh, I've
pronounced this incorrectly.
>> And a good way if you wanted to improve
your vocabulary at the same time would
be maybe listen to a podcast and then
talk into your phone and kind of
summarize the podcast. Be like, I
learned this or um and then it will show
you the words that you're mispronouncing
cuz you know the words in your head, you
can notice them, but the
>> you need to hear them also. Yeah.
>> So, you get a band six for
pronunciation. The biggest issue you
have is grammar, especially when you're
talking about unfamiliar topics. You're
missing words sometimes, like
>> the industry negative parts. I like to
do a lot of journals. I like to be an
introvert
>> instead of I am introverted.
>> Mhm.
>> Um,
>> oh, I love day offs.
>> Instead of I love days off.
>> So you So you're mixing up the little
Sometimes it's a vocabulary issue,
sometimes it's a grammar issue, but
you're mixing things up from time to
time. You're not doing this in every
sentence, but a lot of sentences have
small grammar mistakes in them. None of
the mistakes are are terrible, as in
none of them are major, as in I don't
understand you, but they're just too
frequent for me to give you one of the
high scores. You would get around about
six for grammar. That would be the thing
that I would work on the most if I was
you. But overall, you would get 6.5,
which is about the average score for
speaking.
>> So, how long have you been learning
English or speaking English? seriously
>> speaking English seriously for um a
year.
>> A year?
>> Yeah,
>> you're fine. You're going to be
absolutely fine. Um so 6.5 after one
year is actually amazing. The fact that
you can speak so fluently and so well
about topics that you're passionate
about, that tells me that in 6 months to
a year, you're going to be able to speak
about any topic at that level. So, I
would be very surprised if we met in in
a year's time that your English is still
at that level. I think you're going to
improve massively because if somebody is
speaking at that level so quickly, it it
normally means that they're going to
continue at a similar pace. So, I would
not worry about you at all. You're doing
extremely well. Thank you.